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My first draft was not bad and I felt I did a good job of analyzing how strength was necessary and the different ways he was calling for it but just using one poem was not enough support. The gallery walks were helpful for the fact that they pointed out where strength stood out in “To Da-Duh” and “Damballah.” The walk showed me what I should focus on specifically and all I had to do was make a connection between all the stories which was there was a universal belief within black people that said stand up for what you believe no matter what persecution you will face because, being punished for showing you want change is an acceptable thing when your other option is just allowing a person who has no contrasting difference with you other than skin color run your life in decide how you talk an act is just not acceptable. Seeing these points helped me support arguments I had previously stated in the essay.