Jacqueline-AN


 * When going through the gallery walk, it helped me get an idea of how everyone took/understood the stories. The gallery walk also helped me a lot in constructing my paper, from everybody's comments, questions, and notes that wee posted on my poster. The class discussions on "To Da-Duh" helped me a lot, because i got to hear all the different views on what my classmates thought about the story. My first draft was written quite well and i did not change a lot. I did emphasize more on how Paule Marshall wished New York was more like Barbados. The thing i liked the most about my paper was how I took quotes from the reading and analyzed it in my paper. I think i wrote an excellent paper using compare and contrast/explaining. I believe i did a good job writing my paper using a lot of description, so that the reader can clearly understand the topic i was describing in my paper which was; generational differences and family ties. **


 * WC: 169 **