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Authors Note I believe that there is a good balance between my own words and short quotes however my paper was not even close to being finished. Thus I believe that there is still vast room for improvement. I also have to make sure that I do some close editing to make sure that the quotes that I use are properly cited. Nevertheless I think that I used the quotes in a very creative way and analyzed them accordingly. As far as the organization of my paper I definitely need to work on it. I pretty much typed two pages of analysis and feelings then stopped so the flow of my paper was lack luster. I have general idea of how I want my paper to flow I just need to incorporate these ideas into my paper. I will also use the feedback that Dr. Schettler gave me on my first draft as well. I also think that my paper will vastly improve once i cite my sources properly. By citing properly I mean adding page number and proper MLA format after all of the short quotes that I use so that the reader can easily look up the quotes that I am referring to. Since my paper was about the English language exclusion within language I intend on divulging deeper into examples of exclusion and discrimination in English. To wrap up my essay I will pose possible solutions to the issue.