Georgina's+Author+Notes

I feel as though the gallery walk helped me to get a better understanding of what perspective I was going to take. It also help with me formulate what I thought to be really good ideas that lead to me being able to complete my paper. The changes that were made to my paper after receiving the draft back were a little on the minimum side. I added a few more quotes and also more detail of what was being expressed through the article. I also took and made a fixed the few grammar errors. I also added more about how reading bell hooks work changed my perspective on language, I no longer just see it as words but as a way of life, it is identity. The part that I most like about my paper would have to be the section reflecting on when hooks decided to take her language back. I feel that I was able to convey the power she found in finding her identity though language, and also through empowering those in her classes to do the same. Over all I just feel as though I produced a really good paper and I am happy with it as I hope you are too.