Jeaniya+AN

1. There is a good balance of quotes but they have to be more organized and put together. I also noticed that i got the authors mixed up so that definitely has to be fixed. I have to make sure that my quotes dont overpower my own analysis; once I make my analysis more clear it will have a good balance.

2. Introduction can be very much improved by focusing on African American's struggling when they had to deal with many challenges in their lives which could be examples like the Harlem Renaissance and the incident with the 4 girls that were in the explsion at the church. If these key eventa and iodeas are all linked together in brief statements in the beginning with a thesis, then there will be a better understanding

3. My quotes do nmot include page numbers and that is something that will be fixed.

4.The paper now will follow down the path of struggle and compare it to power and the African AMerican's identity. By these topics in particular it will make a cohesive analysis on how African Americans challenges made them react.