Juan-AN

I choose this topic because I thought it will be very interesting writing about the progress and change that African people performed through the years. There is so much information about African people that I did not know, such as all the negatives issues that they changed to positives. I actually gained more ideas to talk about in this essay. It was very helpful sharing ideas with classmates because they helped me out to come with more details that will make my essay stronger. My final draft had an enormous positive change comparing it to my first draft. I had so many mistakes with grammar and commas, but thanks to my classmates and tutor, I think I fix all my errors on my final draft and I wrote more detail to support the essay. I really liked the way African people have been successful through the years and the changes they have done.