Peter-AN

There is a good balance of short quotes and original analysis. I used short quotes from the poem If We Must Die, which was pretty interesting to analyze. When first writing the paper, i could have made the thesis a little more eye catching. I also had to improve on some of my explanations on how I felt about some things.
 * 1) Is there a good balance between short quotes and original analysis?
 * 1) In what ways could the introduction and/or organization within the paper be improved?

I forgot to do this. (smh)
 * 1) Do all quotes include page numbers?

The paper went deeper into the idea of strength.
 * 1) Where is the paper going next?

**__ Authors Notes __** The stages to writing this paper, was very interesting. It wasn’t your usual read the book and write a paper. I was very motivated to write my paper. Starting with the gallery walk, this exercise basically guided me through my paper because I had access to my thoughts and other classmates. My paper did not change much it had mechanical errors, but in my second draft I am more confident about it because I have seen the professors comments from the first drafts errors. I wish more teachers did this process of writing a paper, it would make life much easier.

I enjoyed the first poem I used in my poem //If We must Die;// it made do a little research about the Harlem Renaissance. After my research it made the poem almost come to life in my head. Writing this paper was a learning experience, I cant wait for the next one.