Jorge-AN

The gallery helped me gain a better insight of what I wanted to write about. Hearing the differing opinions and questions of my fellow colleagues not only helped improve my paper but also assisted me in completing the paper at a faster rate. The workshop group discussions exposed me to some unique writing styles that I have never encountered. Since everyone is from a significant background, I learn from my mistakes, as well as others, which aids in improving the atmosphere in the writing community. From the first draft of my paper, I mostly incorporated facts from our country’s past without mentioning much of the readings. Instead of being extremely specific, I was broad about my topic, where I still had great analysis, yet left out the readings. In the second draft, the thesis mentioned the two readings I wanted to tie into the paper and how it shaped the way we live today. I also changed the title of my essay in a more creative one.