Annalisa's+first+essay


 * I chose my topic from what was the most intriguing to me. The essay "Language" by Bell Hooks caught my interest because I could relate to it. I love the phase" This is the oppressor's laungage yet I need it to talk to you." I felt that language is very power and I could analyze and write a apper. The collaborations from the workshop was a great help. I got to see what my classmates were writing about which gave me new ideas to input onto my essay. I also got feedbacks that helped me improve my essay such as adding quotes and adding other example from other sources. The final draft changed a great deal from my first draft. I corporated a couple more quotes from "Language" and added an example from the Story "Damaballah" to make my essay stronger. What I liked most about my paper is the power that language provide. I feel that language is something that no one can take alway, something I hold dear to my heart. Language can change the world. **