Looping+free-write+for+essay+2+topics

SOME FEEDBACK on Paper 2 Drafts: 1) Make sure you include the best short quotes for your chosen thesis/theme. This will allow you to do more original analysis and not just re-tell the story. 2) Strengthen your thesis after the first draft. You should take "I" language, as in "I will do this..." out of your paper as much as possible and put the focus instead on your chosen theme. Your own ideas will still come through in your analysis without first person language which makes the essay sound less formal. 3) Try to revise any overuse of passive verbs and change them to active tense to improve your writing style. 4) Make sure to include citations/page numbers for quotes, and double-check with Diana Hacker linked on Blackboard for correct formatting. 5) Edit carefully to catch and fix mistakes, spelling, grammar, etc. 6) Create an interesting title and consider using a short quotable quote as an epigraph beneath your title to give your paper more creativity and punch.

In a biased society where inequality reigns supreme women are expected to take on subservient roles. -Whitney Jenkins

Post your favorite sentence from your looping free-write here. Page 2-loop the letter X, when looking all eyes converge to the centerpoint. in art, this is called one point perspective. -Edward Fernandez

Malcolm plans to help the black man live by the roots of their ancestors, not by the assimulation caused by the whites. - Anthony Martinez

My topic for paper #2 is going to be progress and change along with the roles of gender. I will correlate this to the Malcolm X novel and the raisin in the sun film. -Anthony Martinez Thier eyes were watching god. My topic goinhg to be on endurance and strength. -Carlos Flores

my topic for paper 2. self discovering and self love about Janie's life. Harpreet Sahota

Topic: Family Ties, Generational Differences "Parents just dont understand." My question is, should they? How can parents, who've grown up in an entirely different time and period of alternate morals, values, and definition of priorities, expect for their children to follow in their footsteps and glean the same lessons from everyday life they they once did? -Denaya Shorter

The Harlem Renaissance was a time when black people developed their own sense of styles in different forms, and expressing themselves through their own experiences. -Michelle Hopson

"The Play (A Raisin in the Sun) is closer to the contemporary way racist behavior is expressed in comparison to the novel (Their Eyes Were Watching God), which is based during the earlier part of the 1900's". -Benjamin Gonzalez

the play (a raisin in the sun) and their eyes were watching God had a message on gender roles. in both stories we see females, Janie; from their eyes were wathcing God and Beneatha; from A raisin in the sun, who are trying to live their lives based on their own desires on how they want to be not how society wants them to be just because they are women. - Kiah Rothschild

Today Malcolm X is so inspiring because of his endurance through the inequality that he lived. -Ana Ibanez

By creating a sense that "black" is bad there will be racism against themselves and those close to them. -Adriana Gomez

I liked the message that the family was teaching to the younger generations. It's a good idea to pass on the strengths thas has helped their family progress and to keep the strength building. -Anthony Martinez

We all know, either from being taught about or personal experience, how the relationship between blacks and whites has played out over the years. What's stronger, however, is the way that we (black people) have established ourselves among each other--oftentimes using the same system of stereotypes and hierarchy that was placed upon us by our white counterparts. -Marion Sawyer

Malcolm X has one of the most inspiring stories progressing in life as he gained knowledge. -Peter Bowie

Our society has portrayed women as the inferior role for as long as one can remember. - Courtnei Johnson

She also realized that there may be equal rights among everyone, but that doesn't exactly mean everyone perceives each other as their equal counterpart. -Lolita Bounyavong

The factor that keeps blacks from succeeding is lack of unity. -Tyre Miles

Many people are unaware of how racism still exists in places where social lives are occurring such as workforces and schools. Annalisa Vang Identity and self: Its hard to find your identity when you are forced to be and do what other people think you should-Jayla Tunstall

Edurance and strength is great characteristics to posses when faced with any kind of harships.-Kimeka Simmons Topic: Strength and Endurance The everyday struggles of life bring constant reminders of how situations are never systematically placed in order. An order that makes the simplest everyday task bring about emotions of pain, frustration, and hopelessness although, the will to endure always over comes the stronghold of oppression. - Raymond Mitchell

"Anything I do today, I regard it is urgent" In this quote he meant that anything he could do today, it is better doing it right now instead of doing it tomorrow or later. Juan Gastelum.

Topic: Self-Discovery, Self-love, Identity, and Story telling. I chose to write paper two on two poems by Maya Angelou. Comparing and describing how the themes correspond to the poems. -Monica Silva

Topic:Gender Roles and Self Discovery Being degraded as an innocent child by your own father, belittled and passed off as a piece of property. Early on in her childhood she is unwillingly shown what she is expected to be in regards to gender roles and identity -Dorothy Kolen

Topic: Love and Self Discovery Janie was furious to find out that grandma did not approve of Johnny Taylor so much that she tried to convince Janie in marrying another guy. Steven Pope

"Peoples's deeds I believe in, not their words." -Malcolm X -Maxine King